Wednesday, 2 September 2020

Persuasive letter

 W.A.L.T Write a persuasive letter Molly K, Room 2, NBC. Dear Miss Pownall, I simply do not agree that we should have a dog in the classroom because of these three reasons, It will distract people, children might be scared of dogs and will need alot of attention 


Firstly, it can distract people by wagging its tail and barking, My friends dog barks and wags its tail all the time and it gets quite annoying. So having a dog in the classroom would get very annoying.


Secondly, Some kids might be scared of little dogs and get paranoid or stressed out when they see Charlie. If children get stressed out they might frighten the dog. Once my friend came to my house and she got scared when she saw my dog and that got my dog scared.


Lastly, studies have shown that dogs need attention and if we are working all the time (because this is a school) the dog will be sad and we dont want a sad dog in the classroom so please dont bring charlie to room 2


In conclusion I do not think we should have a dog in the classroom because they are distracting, smelly and need attention.


From, Molly





2 comments:

  1. Nice work Molly. Three valid points, all with good explanations and summed up nicely in the conclusion. Ps great pic of Pheonix

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  2. Hey Molly, i really like this post because it is quite creative and has a lot of information in it and i like the information.
    Maybe next time you should get a tallygraph of who wants the dog in the class and people who dont i think that would be cool.
    Other then that i really like the blog post and i agree with your opinions.
    Do you like dogs and why?

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