Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 20 August 2021
6 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Molly,
ReplyDeleteThis is an amazing DLO of Emma Twigg. This is very informative and easy to understand. I also think you chose rather good photos, keep up the good work.
From Jennah
Thank you Jennah, I appreciate this comment.
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Kia ora Molly,
ReplyDeleteI think this is the best DLO I have seen about Emma Twigg. You have obviously put a lot of thought and effort into this. I love how you have laid it all out. It is easy to read and the pictures are relevant to your post.
Did you get to hold the medal?
Hello Miss Holland thank you for commenting on my blog! and yes I did get to hold the metal, it was heavy.
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ReplyDeleteI see why Miss Holland has made her comment! This is a great piece of work from you. Very clear, well set out and informative. Well done!
I love the information that you have included, especially the personal facts. Next time check that you are not repeating your inpfrmation in 2 different places.
Thanks Molly :-)
Hi Miss Stewart thank you for commenting on the blog. C:
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