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Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 23 August 2019
Friday, 9 August 2019
Ellie The Girl
WALT - write stories for enjoyment and hook an audience
NOT A TRUE STORY
Chapter 1 little dreamer
Once upon a lifetime a tiny tiny little
baby was born.Her name was Ellie
and she loved Frogs , yellow
Rose ́s and the colour blue . Ellie
had brown hair and blue eyes and
lived with two big brothers and
her mum and dad. Her brothers
were Dylan and tyler (they were
twins both 5).
had brown hair and blue eyes and
lived with two big brothers and
her mum and dad. Her brothers
were Dylan and tyler (they were
twins both 5).
In her backyard was a big
treehouse full of books the
books were about fairies and
all sorts of bush babies like for
example gumnut babies or
blossom babies . Her mum
amber set it up for when Ellie
is older .
treehouse full of books the
books were about fairies and
all sorts of bush babies like for
example gumnut babies or
blossom babies . Her mum
amber set it up for when Ellie
is older .
Chapter 2 something strange
A few years past now ellie is 8
every day she runs up into her
tree house and reads more
and more about what is in the
world she has gotten a lot of
books now like how to take care
of bugs and insects and she
loves to play with Lily her pet
dog. One day Ellie looked in her
treehouse and every single book
was gone Ellie was shocked
about this for some reason she
suddenly started crying.
every day she runs up into her
tree house and reads more
and more about what is in the
world she has gotten a lot of
books now like how to take care
of bugs and insects and she
loves to play with Lily her pet
dog. One day Ellie looked in her
treehouse and every single book
was gone Ellie was shocked
about this for some reason she
suddenly started crying.
She ran to find lily but something
was wrong Lily was not here .Ellie
walked slowly to dylan and
tylers room and told them
everything tyler loves Lily to and so he
ran into all the rooms in the house
and went all round the neighborhood
Ellie tried to keep up but she was
sad .Dylan was telling mum and
mum got tyler and Ellie who were
soaked by there own tears and
told them the bad news.Lily was
dead
was wrong Lily was not here .Ellie
walked slowly to dylan and
tylers room and told them
everything tyler loves Lily to and so he
ran into all the rooms in the house
and went all round the neighborhood
Ellie tried to keep up but she was
sad .Dylan was telling mum and
mum got tyler and Ellie who were
soaked by there own tears and
told them the bad news.Lily was
dead
Chapter 3 a mirikle
Luckily mum said we could get
another pet but Ellie and tyler
did not want another pet they
wanted Lily .A few days past and
it was Lily's birthday we all
celebrated it by taking flowers
to her grave and paint the things
she loved on her gravestone . When
they got home, there was a
surprise in Ellie treehouse .Ellie
walked in and found all of her books
and a present with holes in it .
Ellie opened the lid of the box and
found…
another pet but Ellie and tyler
did not want another pet they
wanted Lily .A few days past and
it was Lily's birthday we all
celebrated it by taking flowers
to her grave and paint the things
she loved on her gravestone . When
they got home, there was a
surprise in Ellie treehouse .Ellie
walked in and found all of her books
and a present with holes in it .
Ellie opened the lid of the box and
found…
2 BABY FROGS she was so excited
and happy but she did wish Lily was
there.tyler and dylan got two dogs .
Dylan got a labrador and tyler got a
jerman shepherd. 3 years had past
now Ellie was 11 and her brothers
were both 16 .Ellie did everything
with her frogs sunshine and cloud
she even took them to school Ellie's
best friend Kalie loved with the two
frogs
and happy but she did wish Lily was
there.tyler and dylan got two dogs .
Dylan got a labrador and tyler got a
jerman shepherd. 3 years had past
now Ellie was 11 and her brothers
were both 16 .Ellie did everything
with her frogs sunshine and cloud
she even took them to school Ellie's
best friend Kalie loved with the two
frogs
Chapter 4
Ellie and kalie were the best of
friends they played all the time
and Ellie had an amazing life.
When Kalie was not there
to play with Ellie Ellie played
with dylan and tyler .A long
time past and each year they
went to Lily's grave and drew
stuff she loved.It had been 4 years
since Lily's accident and so her
gravestone does not have anymore
room but Dylan , Tyler ,Ellie Amber
and bob (bob is Ellie's dad)will
always love Lily.
friends they played all the time
and Ellie had an amazing life.
When Kalie was not there
to play with Ellie Ellie played
with dylan and tyler .A long
time past and each year they
went to Lily's grave and drew
stuff she loved.It had been 4 years
since Lily's accident and so her
gravestone does not have anymore
room but Dylan , Tyler ,Ellie Amber
and bob (bob is Ellie's dad)will
always love Lily.
THE END
Thank you so much for reading this
story
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